The sky above you discloses
a handful of stars and shadows.
As you draw the lines of a new day
screams gather in your throat.
Unuttered.
Yet desire is fear’s thaw
so you walk over the threshold
and draw lines of desire,
a new path where you paint
a sunshine of hope for freedom,
a rainbow of all colors
for those who suffer and
for those who deserve a better life.
© May 2018 Marta Pombo Sallés
Beautiful! You always seem to have a way with words and I love how eloquently you write. You’re a natural poet, Marta. Love your writing. Also, I love how you described desire. It’s raw emotion and it’s absolutely ravishing 💓
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Thank you so much, Mvadi. Love your writing too because it is always incredibly beautiful and heartfelt. 😘
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You’re very welcome. Thank you very much. I’m so happy you think so 💕
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So beautiful! Really well done!!
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Thank you, Bill. So glad you like it.
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Loved it! 😃
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very well written 🌸
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Wow, this is so encouraging, thank you so much, Shantanu. You all made my day! ☀️
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Pleasure is all mine
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Exquisite 🙂
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Thank you so much, John. That makes me very happy.
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I enjoyed this post watching how a new day is created with exquisite designs and with hope and love !
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Thank you, James, I am so glad you have received my poem this way.
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Very nice, your words ignite hopes for freedom.
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Thank you, Ismail. That is very kind.
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Love this… Beautiful picture, thank you👌
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This is a wondrous poem, and I especially liked these lines.
“As you draw the lines of a new day
screams gather in your throat.
Unuttered.”
And thank you for following my blog/website, muchly appreciated, I hope your enjoy reading my humble writings, and I’m from Geelong Australia,
. Cheers. Ivor.
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Thank you, Ivor, so glad you liked my poem. I am from Catalonia (live next to Barcelona). My blog is humble writing and I never imagined it would be that successful. Cheers.
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Lovely to meet you, and I shall enjoy reading your poems 😊
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I wanted to comment the other day, but I thought I’d comment today. For me, this is a poem of hope despite all the trials we’re put through. Also, I was wondering if you’d be interested in writing for a literary collective. Please contact me if you are. If not I understand. Thank you. – Nitin
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Thank you for your comment. I am flattered by your words and your offer. I never thought my humble writing attempts would get that much attention. I will think about this. Thank you again.
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Oh I love this. Desire is fear’s thaw. It’s a strong line that can be repeatedly spoken, as motivation. Drawing new lines. Just had a lovely image of u doing so. 😀
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Thank you, Luiza.
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Desire is fears thawed
Like ice cube pain
Simply Beautiful
Love the piece
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Thank you so much, Sheldonk. I really appreciate your words.
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Lovely☺🌸
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Thank you, dear. You made my day! 🌈☀️😊
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My pleasure
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Wonderful to take charge of a day and rewrite it. Seizing the power of creation. Banishing half-formed screams. May the lines of desire be ever at your command, my friend!
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Thank you for these lovely words, Gary. You are very kind. 😊
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so sweet…
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Thank you again for your lovely comments.
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welcome…my pleasure…
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Thank you so much for the reblog, Donald. You are very kind.
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