I danced the night ferociously
before I couldn’t learn to walk.
I heard all winds wanting to talk
but ignored them atrociously.
I cut them all with fearful sword
and showed my ridiculous mask
which was for me an easy task
blind as I was dancing aboard
a ship of horror to instill
my ugly laugh on anyone
who thought my doings were ill-done.
I laughed with my most perverse will
unaware of the coming change
that would lead to a transformation
to be expressed with great devotion
displaying a wonderful range
of what I could never suspect
but just love showing its beauty
colors dancing with their duty
to the rhythm of new effect
And so was the dance:
© June 2018 Marta Pombo Sallés
Just elegant both the poem and video. Amazing. I was totally captured by the beauty of it. 😊
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Thank you so much. That makes me very happy. 😊
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So did your dance. 😊
And this I was able to watch it. Am too happy 😅
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Yor performance so good 👌loved it.. ❤
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Thank you. I love dancing and all that involves literature, arts and creation.
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Nice to know that… 🙂
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Beautiful poem and thanks for the added entertainment. Balancing of the sword on your head while dancing – fantastic.
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Thank you. I thought it would be a good idea to use my dancing videos to write new poems for them and post it all together.
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Glad that there are more to come.
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Well, for the moment I think it will just be one more.
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I danced the night ferociously, before I couldn’t learn to walk… wow. I need to read more of your poetry more often.
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Wow, thank so much. I am flattered by this. You are very kind.
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The peom reminded me of Wislawa symborska.
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Oh, that is truly flattering. I heard about her but I have not read any of her poems. Now I definitely will!
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It truely did remind me of her
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I will surely read her poetry.
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I have started to read some poems and I really love her. Found them here: https://www.poemhunter.com/wislawa-szymborska/poems/
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I’m happy that you liked her poems
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Nice ferocity!
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Thank you, haha! 😉
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Great dance n wonderful expression… Beautiful poetry, cheers💐
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Thank you so much. It makes me very happy that so many of you like this. 😊
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OMG…Marta! So smooth, polished and attractive! Again, both the verse and video. I suspect that you’re formally trained in both. So well done!!
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Thank you for your kind comment. In bellydance yes, but in writing poems I am not really trained. I just love reading different genres and have a degree in English and German Language and Literature. I teach these two languages in a high school very close to Barcelona.
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Well… your dancing and writing are both so beautiful! I love it!
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Thank you again, Bill. Wow, that is really flattering and so highly encouraging. I love your poems too as you see. Just keep writing and sharing them. Have a lovely day! 🌈☀️😊
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Precious Moments, I have nominated you for the Mystery Blogger Award and hope you will accept the challenge…Yes?
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Thank you for the nomination. I feel humbled. You are very kind.
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Great! looking to see your response…yahoo!
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Beautiful poetry and the dance. The accompaniment work together like food and wine. 🙂
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Thank you. This is a very nice comment.
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Marta, your poetry
of the dance
has me in a trance.
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Thank you, that makes me so glad,
one of the best comments I had. 😊
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You dance gracefully . Loved it ❤
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Thank you.
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Beautiful. And I have seen how gracefully you dance
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Thank you, Shantanu.
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My pleasure
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Omg was that you dancing.
The words are befitting.
Omg……the dance is beautuful, enthralling and scary. And the music….wow….
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Thank you. I am glad you like this.
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What? I love it!
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Thank you again. That is really very encouraging. We all have our dreams and passions. I love dancing, poetry and so many more things that foster creativity. I am one of those people who are in constant need of creating. 🌈☀️🌿😊
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I can see that…..an all rounder.
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Thank you. I am glad you like this.
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Such a dance… And I mean the poem! But of course, you are so gracious on your back and forth! 😘
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Thank you, Luiza. 😘
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The mask is genius and it gives us two different performances. Love the fan at the end. 👏👏👏👏🔥👌🔥
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Thank you again. So glad you liked this.
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