Feel it slowly
the dance of my hands
on your body.
Lick fingers
with the tip of my tongue.
Put my mouth on yours
smell your scent
feel the fragrance
taste the juices and
soak my lips
into yours.
Sip your nectar
hold you in the arms
of my courage.
If I only could turn
this dream into reality.
Gather the strength
to turn my dreams of chocolate
into fervent passion,
burning desire.
Touch you and
be touched by you.
Melt like butter
vanish in kisses
make you feel
as I feel for you.
Consume my desire
if I would ever find you.
Impossible or not?
© August 2018 Marta Pombo Sallés
They say nothings impossible, ….. And I love the glorious imagery of your words.
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Thank you so much, Ivor. I am pleased you like this.
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Always my pleasure
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Whew!!! Nice image. I agree with Ivor, nothing is impossible!
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Wow, what a sensuous and erotic image.
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Thank you. So glad you have enjoyed this.
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“Moments, with moments of you.”
Blurring the divide between fantasy and reality is not an impossibility.
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Thank you for this beautiful comment.
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So many things are possible and that is the wonder of living. A poem full of passion.
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Thank you, Renee.
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A beautiful, sensual poem. Lovely writing.
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your comment.
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You are welcome.
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For a melting moment,
Marta . . .
you reduced me
to melting chocolate floating in nectar.
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Thank for your delicious comment, David.
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That, my friend, is so sensual and evocative. Absolutely took away my breath.
Don’t mind me if I keep coming back to consume this verse over and over.
So beautiful and special!!!!!
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Thank you so much, Bill. You are very kind. Taking your breath away… that is precisely what happens to me when I read your poems!
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Well then… we feel the same about each other’s work. That’s a nice place to be…yes? 🙂
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Definitely.
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😊
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This is so sensuous and so moving!! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Newton. Your comment is highly appreciated.
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You are very welcome, Martha.
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Great imagery!
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Thank you, Braeden. So glad you like this.
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My pleasure
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Wow. It started with such strong allure and than you took your readers to a different state stating it is a dream and slowly drifting them to realize it is an aspiration. Brilliant.
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Thank you for your great comment, Shantanu. I am so humbled and flattered by yours and the other people’s praises. You are all very kind to me. This is so encouraging!
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Your writing is beautiful. 😊🌸
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Thank you so much!
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beautiful. if i could only turn my dreams to chocolate. 👍
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Thank you so much!
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So evocative and visual. Great work!
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Thank you so much, Elle.
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Beautiful and sensuous images. I loved this.
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Thank you so much.
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Very beautiful. So sensual and yet so starkly it hints the uncertainty of satiety and satisfaction. As the vaccum generates the pull, some amount of vaccum might always be required for the expectant nature to survive.
Thus to be in hope, the total fulfilment might not be possible.
Sorry I went on this soliloquy. Its beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. Yes, that is exactly, hinting the uncertainty and the vacuum of unfulfilment. So glad you have liked this.
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Excellent , it’s alluring
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Thank you.
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I agree, very sensuous poem. That the emotions are drawn out through details and not with abstractions is a big big plus. The poem resonates.
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Thank you so much, Donald. I appreciate your comment and it satisfies me that this poem resonates with you. It seems not so difficult for me to write in English, my third language.
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third language? wouldn’t have known.
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