
Moon stayed with us on each terrace
of hope we had built together.
Our sweet friend came every night,
sometimes hidden behind endless clouds,
others as radiant as our hearts
ready to embark in an Icarus flight.
We followed the moon high up in the sky
until our wings collapsed and we fell down.
Some other citizens did not take flight,
they stayed on the ground next to the waters
where the moon reflected itself.
One boy tried to fish the celestial body
but he could not, and some people
laughed at the absurdity of his occurrence.
He only wanted to join us, hopers,
believers in dreams can come true.
If only our wings had been stronger…
If only all those other citizens had followed us…
But none of this happened. Instead,
our hopes were buried in the mud.
Moon buried in the mud.
Citizens beaten up by the police,
humiliated, imprisoned or exiled,
and our political leaders in constant disagreement…
Where is the Unity We, the People, ask for?
After two years and a half gone by
all of a sudden the moon has returned
to a terrace of hope. Can’t you see that?
Or am I deluding myself? No, there is
that hope in the pale moonlight.
Our candle’s still burning…
It will take longer than expected,
while our wings are being repaired.
We are not that amateur now,
we are perfecting the technique
and the Empire will slowly decompose.
Our candle’s never to be extinguished.
We don’t know when it will happen.
I hope not many years from now.
We, the People, have only ourselves
and we shall take our final successful flight.
© 2020 Marta Pombo Sallés
This is beautiful. Really well said. May Allah bless each one in her/his journey. Āmīn
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Thank you, Muntazir. Your comment means a lot to me. 🙏
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Oh Marta,…..
What a desperate plight, and flight of hope,
Let us hope for the peoples sake
That the moon of dreams hasn’t lost the rope
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Thank you, Ivor, for this beautifully written poetic response. 💕
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Your moving poem deserved a touching response ….💙🌏
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Thank you again, Ivor. 💕
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Excellent and heartfelt poem for your nation, Marta. Politicians who are not bothered for anyone. They only know how to destroy our country of its resources and us of our every little penny and do not allow us to live peacefully in our beautiful Earth. All will be good, Pray to Him who knows all and my prayers too are with you and your country.
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Thank you so much for your comforting words, Kamal. 💕
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Hope is a powerful force
Freedom has no master
Truth will ever run the course
May the Sun arise and shine
upon a free Catalonia 🙏
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Thank you, David. Always such beautifully poetic responses. How I love them! 💕
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Your poetry inspires them,
Marta 🧡💛🧡
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🧡💛🧡
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Hello Marta, so long ago have we reconnected. Hope all is well with you and hope to see more of your stories.
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Been busy lately and have no time for wordpress. Yes, so good to reconnect. Thank you for taking the time to check out my posts. Much appreciated. 🧡💛🧡
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of course, may your busyness fulfill you.
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Have missed you Marta! Please stay safe.
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I am safe, Kat, just been too busy and have no time for wordpress. I have missed you too. Thank you so much for checking out my posts. Much appreciated. 🧡💛🧡
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I’d love to meet you one day Marta. I just feel the pull!
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Yes, It would be great to meet you. Come to visit Barcelona. I live in a town close to the big city. Only about 20 min by train.
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I would love that! I have friends in Algarve and one day I need to make a trip there!
Have an amazing day Marta.
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You too, dear.
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the moon is the beacon in our night…..
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Yes, indeed. Thank you for your comment, Mark. Much appreciated.
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Beautifully written. I can hear the voices cry a ray of hope in your poetry.
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Thank you for this lovely comment, Susan. Voices crying a ray of hope, yay! 🤗😘
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How lovely to visit you here and peek at the richness of your imagery and stand witness to your call. Poetry delights me in its daring to speak out when other voices say only what is demanded of them. hugs, pat
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Pat. I am very appreciative of your words. Hugs 💕
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I loved this poem – anything with the moon I always long for
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Thank you, Shantanu. So glad you enjoyed this.
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My absolute pleasure
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This begins so beautifully and then hits home hard with its true message. Sadly the forces that rule run in fear of liberating the people – they cannot/will not realise that, by freeing people it actually results in stronger bonds. I am a novice when it comes to your politics – as, I suspect, is everyone not personally touched by your situation – but I am sure that independence would actually result in a far stronger bond between the people of your nation than repression and fear. My best to you.
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Thank you so much for this beautifully thoughtful and comforting comment, Chris. 💜❤💛
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Hello Moments I have Nominated you for The Mystery Blogger Award. This is on my blog page. You do deserve this !
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Thank you so much for the nomination, James.
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You are very welcome, my friend
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…And yet, we must continue to set our sights for glimmers of that moon. Beautifully done, Marta!
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Thank you, Ursula. Your comment means a lot to me. 😍
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Magical!
👍🌌
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
NOT ONE OF MANY…SUCCESSFUL FLIGHTS? NOW THAT WE SEE THAT OUR HOPES—LIKE THE MOON—ARE NOT STUCK IN THE MUD?
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Unfortunately for too long we trusted those we really did know very well with our dreams and hopes—making them powerful enough to take over and ignore us. Reversing the tide of human history and the natural tendencies of men and women to lord it over us…seems nearly impossible! But..with the Christian God…all things are possible—one relationship at a time, generally! 😀
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Oh Marta…..this breaks my heart. You are eloquence itself. I send so much Love and with all my might wish for Peace and resolution for Your people. ❤️🌀🌟🙏🏼❤️
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Thank you so much, Katy! Your words are thoughtful and uplifting. 🤗💕
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Sending You the hugest hug!!! 🤗🌀❤️🙏🏼😊
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Likewise. 🌟💕🌹💜
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Strong, Deep and Empowering! ✨✨
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Thank you, Sonia! 🤗💕
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The lines, ‘Our hopes were buried in the mud” and “Moon is buried in the mud,” guide us to follow your thoughts. Well-done, Marta.
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Thank you for this great comment, Newton.
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You are welcome back, Marta!
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