To know what Love is,
with just a picture big glimpse
through an open door.
Beyond the broken schemes,
and forsaken dreams,
littering a crooked floor.
Of things never spoken
this side of the shadow curtain.
Tasting that promise certain
of abundantly so much more.
Beautiful message on love.
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Yes, indeed!
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Yes absolutely and that is Love.
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This is really great, Marta!! 🙂 I read the original as well.
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David is a great artist-poet-writer-photographer… multitalented!
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Sure, Marta. Those talents together make him a great poet.
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And so are you, Newton! You have no idea of how glad I am to have come across you all in the wondrous poetic realms of wordpress.com. It just saddens me that the underpriviliged of this world do not even have time to enjoy all this because their first needs are not met: “I hear in the back of my head the story of elderly, who are committing crimes, so that they can go to jail to get three meals a day and housing.” (from my friend Mario Savioni’s impacting post: https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/02/three-meals-a-day-and-housing/)
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What a lovely poem describing love. Thanks for the share.
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You are welcome.
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Moltes gràcies, dolç Marta 😎
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De res, un plaer. It is dolça Marta (an a because it is feminine) 😜
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You keep telling me Marta.
Perhaps I need go to live in Barcelona,
for I keep forgetting 🙄
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You will be welcome any time David. 😊
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🙏😎
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Thank you so much for this share mate 🙌🙌❤️❤️
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You are welcome, Nirant. So glad you like this beautiful poem.
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☺️☺️
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Lovely poem, well penned
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Thank you! David is a great poet and multifaceted artist.
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You’re welcome
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Thanks Martha for the share. All I can manage to say is WOW!!! He has true talent. Still trying to catch my breath. 🙂
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Yes, indeed he does. BTW, it is Marta. 😉
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Sorry Marta. 🙂
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🤗 💞
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Thank you for the reblog, Marta 😎
I’ve been unplugged recently, with two
weddings in two weeks my two last
remaining unmarried kids.
Might inspire a piece of flash fiction,
‘Two Weddings and a Hangover’ ?😇
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Congratulations for the two weddings! I like the suggested title with the hangover, haha! So glad your kids are happily married, where love is so difficult to find nowadays. For instance, what are the chances of a person who is attracted to a much younger one? Can this work and become love? This is a great post by my friend Mario Savioni perhaps you could reblog it also for your followers? https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/02/12/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-6/
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i like that abstractness of the poem
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Yes, David is great at writing this way. Thanks for commenting!
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Nice poem.
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Thank you, Donald. David, like you, is a great poet.
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This is inspiring. This very nice
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Thank you, Rita.
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