Ominous winds sweep the earth
Brazen.
Flames get higher and almost
Burn you.
Breathing fresh air while rowing,
Your journey
Goes on.
The piercing ground lies at your feet,
The sheltering sky is also pierced
And more distant
Than ever.
Take your needle
Start to sow
Recompose the broken pieces
Of life’s puzzle.
This thread is your most
Intimate resistance.
Sow the sky, the ocean and
The earth.
Make a dress to protect the nudity
Of the leafless tree.
Save the heart from burning
And keep on rowing your boat.
Keep yourself afloat.
© March 2018 Marta Pombo Sallés
In a world of strife
much good advice 😎
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Thanks, David. I am glad you like the advice. This poem is based on a book I read by Catalan philosopher Josep Maria Esquirol. The book has the same title as my poem’s. It is a great read but there is no English translation so far. I have tried to provide a very brief summary of Esquirol’s main ideas.
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It’s so lovely and I can feel something in every word you write. In my head I make a journey, so endlessly liberating to your last word. I am grateful that you share and I have just had a flash of light in my life🦋
Thank you🌸
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You are welcome, dear Orkidedatter. You are very kind and this is a lovely comment! So glad my poem has a liberating effect on you. This feels me with great joy. Tusen takk! 🦋 😘 💞
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Thank you, my pleasure, and that was very nice words🦋
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Wonderfully penned! Never give up on the journey to move forward! 😊
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Thank you! Yes, we have to keep going no matter how hard the road before us might be.
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The picture of the boat grabbed me! I kept going back to it while reading the poem!
This poem is beautiful! It’s soothing and holds a lot of wisdom as well as..hope.
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Thank you, Kat. Wisdom and hope. I like that.
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I find a life-boat is essential to buoy me up
to anchor in a harbour’s peaceful glow.
The sun and moon, and stars
are there to guide me
The wind and rain, and storms
life’s seasons sow.
Lots of Love.
Sibyl X
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Thank you for your lovely poetic response, Sibyl.
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You’re very welcome
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It is all about staying afloat. Well expressed. Quite beautiful
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Thank you. So glad you liked this.
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This piece with a piece of advice is beautifully penned. The following image is so original: Sow the sky, the ocean and
The earth.
Make a dress to protect the nudity
Of the leafless tree.”
I love this image, Marta. 🙂
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Well penned
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Thank you!
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My pleasure
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Well penned words of wisdom.
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Thank you, Susan.
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Absolutely beautiful – we should always strive forward to achieve new height to meet new goals
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Yes, indeed, thanks for your great comment Shantanu. So glad you enjoyed this.
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A lovely poem. Such subtle nuances that say so much.
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Thank you, Renee. So glad you enjoyed this.
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I grew up beside the hot sand of a sea that I saw every day. Your poem arrives and envelops me in that nostalgia. Great as you say.
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Thank you. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment. So glad my poem makes you feel all that.
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It’s so difficult to comment on this poem because each line conveys something. You amaze me with these words!
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Thank you, Preksha. All your comments mean a lot to me!
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Glorious! So sorry that I’ve missed your updates!!!
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No worries and thank you!
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Thank you for your patience…but WP cancelled my “following” of you. Maddening! I’ve heard of others with the same problem. So aggravating.
But know, Marta, that I’ve “re-followed” you. I don’t want to miss a word of your work.
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Thank you. I am so glad to have you back!
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I won’t let WP defeat me again!!!!
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Yea!💪
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💪!
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A title well matched with the words and vice versa Marta.
Great!
Shiva
🌷
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Thank you, Shiva. I am very appreciative of your comment.
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You write so well Marta. You have a beautiful blog.
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Thank you! I am flattered.
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