
I just met a turtle in the park.
It was on the way
Not where its mates
Usually are,
Near the lake
Sunbathing.
It was solitary.
I figured out it spoke
To me.
Told me to slow down.
And so I sat
As words began to dance
In flight
Carrying a smell of pine trees,
Rosemary and lavender.
Like butterfly wings
Fluttering in the wind
They intertwined
And slowly began
To land on my paper
One by one.
I pulled my thread,
Took the needle
And began to sow
One after the other.
A word weaver
Just like my friend
Quim
And all the others.
I just met a turtle.
© March 2019 Marta Pombo Sallés
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You’re a sewer of words that match your thread that connects the view you see land on your paper.
Charming!
Lots of Love
Sibyl X
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Thank you so much for this lovely comment, Sibyl. Lots of Love to you as well. 😍
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XXX
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Oh Marta, I want to meet your Turtle, what a wondrous poem you wove. I’m so pleased you sowed this glorious piece together for us readers to enjoy 😊☺️
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Thank you, Ivor. I am very appreciative of your thoughtful comment. 😊
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Always my pleasure
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You have an incredible luck to have friends among the animals. They have no verbal ability but you have managed to give them the words to weave your verses in a fantasy to enjoy it to the greatest. Good for you.
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Thank you, Macalder. So glad you enjoyed this.
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Loved the link – we all need to slow down – enjoy life – take one moment at a time
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Yes, indeed. Thank you for your thoughtful comment, Shantanu.
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Marta, words so eloquently woven together… a poetic masterpiece!
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Thank you so much, Lance. Your comment means a lot to me!
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You’re sincerely welcome, Marta!
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👏👏👏
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Thank you!
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Marta, I love this! The images of words as flowers and butterfly wings is so beautiful…and the weaving of the words. So lovely!
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Thank you so much, Susan. So glad you enjoyed this poem. I am always very appreciative of your support. You are so kind.
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Beautifully written, Marta. Great imagery and thought provoking poem!
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Thank you for your kind words, Iris.
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Moments!!!! ❤❤
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Thank you!
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💖
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Marta, you have written such a beautiful poem. This poem gives me a sense of happiness.
This particular turtle which the poet meets, also which is ‘solitary’ symbolizes(to me) about the different shades in each person’s choices and how every one of them is pretty.
This particular turtle’s words are dancing and I admire the olfactory imagery employed in the line,
‘Carrying a smell of pine trees
Rosemary and lavender’
I like how words flutter in the wind and then they interwind and then landed on the poet’s paper and every line after this is so happily written.
And while ending you remind us again of the turtle from where the poem started.
Marta, this poem ACTUALLY made my day! I love reading your poems. 😁
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Great reading and review of my poem, Preksha. Love what you said! ☺💕
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I am so glad my poem has made your day!
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Perfect poem for spring 🌸😊
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Thank you Kat. You warm my heart with this lovely comment.
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You’re welcome Marta. 🌸🌞
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Oh, you weaved this one perfectly. Loved it.
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Very nice. perfect for the season!
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Thank you so much, Neha! ❤
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A lovely poem, Marta. Sometimes it is good to pay heed to the turtle. I am moving on Saturday. Hope all is well with you.
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Thank you Renee. Where are you moving to? Another city, town or village?
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I’m moving into my daughter’s home in a town in another county as I cannot afford to rent on my own any longer due to the increases in rent as I no longer work and am on Social Security. It’s a fixed income and as I have a heart condition I decided moving into her home was my best option at this time. I am hoping it will work out.
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Sounds reasonable. I am sure it will be fine.
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I like the way you write.. Blessings and love ♥️♥️
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Thank you! I am flattered. Blessings and love to you too.
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You have a way with words, weaving into a persons soul, even with no words. I also loved the use of a turtle as the animal. A slow mover, never in a rush. Understanding the meaning of life with the smell of flora, beauty with butterflies and the magic of it all when word appeared on paper. Well penned a beautiful read.
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Thank you for such a thoughtful comment Susan. So glad I was able to communicate all you said. You are very kind.
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Sometimes an introvert turtle
needs to take a solitary spell.
But I’m sure, Marta, you were able
to coax it out of it’s shell😎
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Well, I just tried to
as best as I knew,
We’re often too afraid
to come out of our shell.
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This is incredibly beautiful, spiritual, and full of wisdom. I truly love it! Thank you kindly.
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You are welcome Anne. Thank you for your lovely comment!
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
PRETTY SMART TURTLE, WOULDN’T YOU SAY? 🙂 LOVE THIS!
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Meeting a turtle that which asks you to slow down is a wonderful thing to have said.
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Thank you again, Shiva. Love your great comments!
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Thanks Marta.
Time Waits for You at my end.
😃
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😊
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Turtles are slow but sure. They teach us to take things in stride, not to be stressed by the fast pace of the modernization.
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Yes, very true. Thank you for your thoughtful comment!
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You are definitely a weaver of words. This is beautiful.
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Thank you again! Your comments mean a lot to me.
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You are most welcome.
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A master craft of words…
So well done!
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Thank you!
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The pleasure is mine!
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I love this!!! Thank You and Cheers! 🙂
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Thank you. So glad you love it! Love and cheers to you. 💕
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My pleasure! 😊💖☀️
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Beautiful and to sit in silence and weave your thoughts under the great pine tree. Lovely poem, M.😊😊😊
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So glad you enjoyed this poem. Your comments are very encouraging and mean a lot to me.
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Thanks dear M and same here it is so nice to be having good blogger friends who r always encouraging us.😊😊😊😊
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Yes, indeed.
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😊😊😊😊
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A beautiful story, meet a turtle that talks to you. I liked it a lot. Greetings.🌹
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Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it!
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🙋🏼♀️🌹💝
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